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Violet Parr Pre by ~bananas17402:iconbananas17402:



I quickly entered my apartment trying to be quiet for no one to hear me. When I closed the door and locked it behind me I sighed happily and phased back into image. It felt nice to be home for the short time that I will be. I walked out towards the window seeing the entire city from a birds eye view. I took off my long gloves, and my boots feeling the cool air between my toes and fingers. I sighed and heard the thunder crash against the sky. I closed my eyes feeling the sound around my body. I opened my eyes, and looked down seeing my body disappear again, and I woke up a bit, and my body phased back once more. I have to work on that.
The phone rang, and I checked the time, "Oh no!" I quickly ran over to my phone and answered.
"Hello?" I asked into the phone waiting for the always delayed response.
"Hey yourself, so Violet where are you? I have dinner readied up and everything!" My boyfriend asked into the phone.
"I'm sorry work got busy, and I had take care of some things as well. I guess with all the work I forgot about tonight I am so sorry!"
"Look, just come over now so we can eat because I want to ask you something," he replied.
"Alright I'll be there in twenty minutes," I replied back and smiled.
"Alright I'll see you then bye!"
"Bye," I finished and hung up the phone. I decided to not take a shower, and dry my hair instead.  When I finished drying my hair I walked into my closet, and took out my most casual pieces of clothing from my wardrobe, and threw them on. My crime fighting outfit laid on the floor crumpled up when I changed out of it. I picked it up, and parted my hangers seeing the wooden bored ahead of me. I pressed my fingers, and tapped in the keys, and it opened up. A white glow came into view as did the rest of my crime fighting outfits. I walked in, and hung up my recently used one, and took out a fresher one. I closed the door behind me, and placed the fresh one in the bottom of my bag, and it flattened as if it wasn't even there. I placed me gloves and shoes, including my mask flattening it to a paper thin size and placed them in too. Storage was my number one thing I asked for when I came to Edna about my new uniform. It fits my personality and my powers perfectly.
I sighed, and went back into my room seeing the small picture of Zach and I by my bed mantle. We have been dating for about a year now, and somehow I still learn more and more about him each time I see him. What makes me so attracted to him was the mystery in him. It was like he always had something to hide when he would ever talk about himself. I always thought that someday I could probably figure it out, if not then I will still love him. The thing was I will always have something to hide from him as well, which I guess makes us equals.
I smiled as I threw on my rain coat, and put on my high heels. I took my umbrella, and sighed knowing it would be less trouble for me to block the rain with my force field then anything else. I walked back out my apartment, and entered the elevator hoping that maybe I can enter in alone.
The doors slid open, and I sighed seeing the small crowd of people with children, and grown men reading the newspapers. One of them had a small Scottish Terrier on them, which barked madly seeing me.
"Shut up Blakie before you give everyone a headache," the man ordered and the dog went silent as I entered in the cramped space.    
I looked down seeing the newspaper the man was holding with the headlines, "Zero saves children from a speeding bus at ultra light speed!" Interesting how supers have came back with a bang since Syndrome attacked the city. What is more interesting is when Zero came into picture. I mean after my small feats with helping police and gang shoot outs I thought I would make the headlines a bit more then he did. His hair wasn't the classic mullet or crew cut that most other male supers had. His was, in fact, a more modern punk twist, and his black hair covered half his face. Somehow I was really attracted to him, but I have never seen him in action at all. I pouted knowing that seeing him was far fetched quite a bit. What was really hot was that his powers shared a similarity to mine. I continued on staring at his picture not even noticing that the elevator doors opened, and the man went on his own way. I heard the doors beginning to close, and I reacted at placed my force field at one of the doors to block it open as I made my leave. My hand released the field and it disappeared out of sight without anyone seeing it, and the government having to come and bail me out again.
I soon exited out of the lobby, and the rain poured down once again. I opened up my umbrella deciding to not take the cab for the four blocks. My heels clicked against the wet pavement as my spirit grew alive again hearing the lively sounds of the city around me, but my hero instinct was on the look out for the danger that lurks around every corner.
I heard helicopters above me shooting at one of my close family friends. I saw the worried citizens around me pointing fingers and screaming at the sight. I know Frozone has it handled enough to not need me. I continued on passing block by block. Hearing the world around me, and knowing how fragile it was to getting itself into messes. Like my father said we are the maids always cleaning up these messes. I smiled again, and entered into Zach's apartment building.
The lobby was a calm blue as the usual fake plants filled the area, and I walked up to the elevator section holding tightly to my purse making sure I was still holding it. I pressed the up button, and entered in the little elevator. I pressed for floor twenty three and the elevator soon turned into life, and took me up the flights. The doors opened, and I could see Zach leaning against his front door smiling a very toothy grin knowing what small trouble I will be in. I walked up to him and placed a kiss on him. "Sorry I am late," I said and kissed him again.
"Don't be because you are here now," he replied and smiled again.
I rubbed his head in a playful way feeling his blonde crew cut, and I smiled again knowing that he wasn't Zero since his hair sticks out like a sore thumb.
"So what did you want to ask me?" I asked.
"Lets talk after dinner," he replied and showed me in.
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Author's Comments

Well I guess I am having a Pixar Disney kinda mood, but I really want to know what you guys think about this!!! So please comment and give me some honest feed back because I can really use that!

And yes Violet is 24 years old and I do not own Incredibles and whatever credit entitles it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Violet Parr is one of my all time animated characters! Well done bananas17402! Keep up the good work!

By the way, Violet is also a major character in my fan fiction. I think you would find an interesting read.

--
Racoon bacon is the meat of the future - Ahmet Zappa.

I love Violet Parr; Helen Parr; Mirage; Sonia the Hedgehog; Sawyer (from CDD); Sailor Mercury and Sora Takenouchi!
:iconbananas17402:
huh thanks I just thought since I have written so much in a totally different region that I can open my mind to something else for a while thank and I'll be sure to get around to it

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I wish I can draw
The only way I can do such a talent
Is to think it through
And use a keyboard
Writing through my thoughts
I become the drawer I always wanted to be
With words
:iconswissair171:
Please comment on each chapter, OK?

--
Racoon bacon is the meat of the future - Ahmet Zappa.

I love Violet Parr; Helen Parr; Mirage; Sonia the Hedgehog; Sawyer (from CDD); Sailor Mercury and Sora Takenouchi!
:iconbananas17402:
alrighty I have a bust few days ahead of me but I;ll try and get around to it ;p then comment my writing because I got my first real short chapter in

--
I wish I can draw
The only way I can do such a talent
Is to think it through
And use a keyboard
Writing through my thoughts
I become the drawer I always wanted to be
With words
:iconswissair171:
OK.

--
Racoon bacon is the meat of the future - Ahmet Zappa.

I love Violet Parr; Helen Parr; Mirage; Sonia the Hedgehog; Sawyer (from CDD); Sailor Mercury and Sora Takenouchi!

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